Topic: [Cutscene script] Anteater vs CrocoCopters

I've been doing some scripting to design how the cutscene with the anteater and the crococopters could be enhanced a bit further to pick up the pace of the game. Time is measured in hours minutes and seconds.

Anteater vs Crococopter scene

0:00:00
Scrolls level to the right, past some
parts where Surge hasn't been. A pair of
Crococopters WHIZZING down from the sky

0:00:03
Animals scampers around to the terrible
sounding VOICES the CC's uses to talk with.

0:00:07: CC 1 (to scared anteater)
    Hold it right there!

0:00:13: A (yelps scared)
    Who me? No way!!
   
0:00:16: CC 2
    You there! Stop it!
   
0:00:19: A
    I don't think s...
   
As the scene progresses more and more animals and
CC's rushing to and fro, animals getting ambushed, and
disapears with violent purple flashes, when suddenly...
   
0:00:20: Anteater screams in fear as 3 more CC swops
down over him in opposed direction, and nearly misses him.

0:00:22: Surge goes in knocking 4 of the CC's out of mid air.

    "Break off your attacks, or I'll destroy you!"
   
0:00:27: CC:
   
    "We'll see about that!"
   
0:00:29: CC swoops down on Surge, and nearly knocks him out

0:00:33: Anteater scampers away faster than before

0:00:36: A: "Someone save me from this mess!"
   
0:00:38: Three more speed enhanced CC's sweaping
down towards the scared anteater
   
0:00:39: CC 1: "We can arrange that!"
   
0:00:41: CC 2: "Get over here!"
   
0:00:43: The CC's picks the anteater off the ground

0:00:44: Anteater screams in agonizing pain as the CC's
steel enhanced claws tear deep wounds in him,

0:00:45: Surge sees what's going on, and rushes to aid

0:00:46: The CC's engage their enhanced engines

0:00:47: As Surge is less than a meter away from the CC's
they activates their beacons, and transports out in a
violent purple flash that finaly knocks out Surge.
   
0:00:50: Surge wakes up, dizzy, and in great shock of what
just happened. He shakes off the dust, heads down to a creak
to tr to get some water. Stunned by the fact that the creak is
bone dry he spins away towards the newly constructed dam.